Score: 10

"Very nice :D"

submission: Zombie Charlie

date: December 23, 2008

Hahaha that was great I really liked it. I realized what video you were maing a parody of but it'd be nice if you listed the reference video in the movie description so people who haven't seen it know what you're making fun of. :)

Score: 7

"Intense :O"

submission: Awesome Dbz Fight!!!

date: December 5, 2008

This movie felt like a cross between a stick fighting movie and dbz fight scene. The action was INTENSE which I appreciated. Most dbz style movies are lukewarm actionwise but you captured the shaky camera / out of breath feel that goes into movies like the Bourne series. The blur effect and unique camera angles were nice too. It wasn't just a sidescrolling fight, you gave it a cool 3D feel. Only suggestions I can make are to smooth out the artwork and work on giving the characters more depth. It looked like two shadows were fighting and had a rough feel to it. Overall it was a lengthy and action packed scene. I'm looking forward to part II. :)

Score: 7

"Basic avoid game"

submission: that FISH game

date: December 5, 2008

Haha I played it until I got whacked by that first fast moving fish. Really didn't see that coming, made me laugh. :x These avoid games drive me nuts cause you always have to start from the beginning if you lose. But overall this is fun and has a decent difficulty level. The only comments I can think of are to use less repetetive music and to upgrade the artwork.

Score: 6

"Sprites... x_x"

submission: Sonic vs Shadow 2 DA MAX

date: December 5, 2008

It's your run of the mill random fight scene between two sprite characters. Nothing too entertaining, it had that "seen it before" feel. So when working with sprites try to break through the status quo and use some new ideas. Not just mindless fighting between two characters. Even the smallest iota of a storyline would help. I know you made a comment about the sounds but that doesn't really excuse you from commenting about them. Not one of them really seemed to fit in to the movie, and there's tons of places on the internet for you to find individual sounds + sound fx packs. Another thing is the entire scene was very small and compacted. Try zooming in on the action so people don't have to squint to see what's going on. The evolving into Captain Falcon scene felt random and awkward. Overall I the fight scene was alright, I liked that you added some of your own artwork instead of using pre-made sprite attack effects, but there's definately alot of room for improvement and I hope you continue to practice and gain experience.

Score: 5

"Broken game"

submission: Putin Kombat

date: December 4, 2008

Please make the instructions for a game in a language the majority of NG users can understand. The game is broken because you can't beat the enemy without almost killing yourself. Then when you try to stop and regenerate health the enemy regens as well. Not very enjoyable. If you're going to have a stamina bar, make it seperate from the health bar.

Score: 8

"Haha!"

submission: The Anniversary

date: December 4, 2008

Cute story. :3 I liked the detailed artwork in the beginning, and I thought you'd gotten lazy once the artwork switched to Ascii but I realize it was him sending her text messages to cheer her up. :) Decent animation and sound.

Score: 10

"Incredible"

submission: Civilization Machine

date: December 4, 2008

Really awesome idea. I was fascinated by how letting things run their course at certain points leads to a success of sorts and pressing onto another path led to destruction. I played around alot and I think I viewed all of the possible options. I enjoyed the project, and I think it's worth turning it into a larger scale project with sound, a bigger planet, and more elaborate chronologic choices. I see alot of potential in your project. Hope you got a good grade :)

Score: 9

"Good stuff"

submission: The Greatest Idea Ever!

date: November 21, 2008

You based the entire movie on the opinions of mis-informed media organizations. So it felt awkward watching the movie and I almost felt sorry for you with the overuse of GREAT IDEA jokes. Yeah... haha I get it. It could make a black hole...great idea... haha i see the sarcasm there...good one. Not even, seeing as that isn't even true. But regardless of your sarcastic movie shitting all over it's own purpose the animation, artwork, and voice acting were very good and i'm basing my score on that seeing as you score a "0" in basic facts about the subject.

Score: 10

"Perfect"

submission: Guitar Geek

date: November 20, 2008

This is an awesome addition to the flash rhythm gaming collection. The menu layout is great, the tutorial is helpful and the game is easy to understand. Nice range of difficulty and the high score table is a nice touch. Decent variety of songs and after playing a few of them I didn't see any problems with syncing at any difficulty level so great job on that too. The only thing that seemed a little off was the artwork during gameplay. It kind of looked and felt like I was rocking out on a acoustic guitar. It could just use a little more flash and neon. I know at some points there's special effects like lightning but it'd be nice to have a general rock concert feel like the keys having pulsing neon borders or something like that. That's just my opinion though, I think the game itself is awesome.

Score: 8

"Should get a good grade"

submission: Hepatitis A Project

date: November 19, 2008

Decent amount of information about the subject and good effort with the artwork and animation. You used a really crappy version of the song though, you couldn't find a higher quality instrumental? And add a pre-loader to your movies so you don't have to worry about the "white screen."